Brian Beam
Note: This has not been fully edited and a couple words have been changed to avoid spoilers.
The
world was dead. Blackened splinters, the
sole remnants of trees, stabbed into the sky as ash descended from above. The ground was charred black, fissures
marring its surface in spider-webbed patterns as far as the eye could see. From my vantage atop a bluff covered with
deadened, brown grass that crunched under my feet, I felt an overwhelming sense
of loss and dread. In my heart, I knew
that the state of the land was somehow my fault.
“Impressive,
is it not?” a confident male voice announced from behind me.
I
turned my head, the background blurring nauseatingly as I did. My eyes met those of my father. He stood there in his regal robes, the crown
on his head dull in the gloom of the darkened sky. His mouth curved up in sinister satisfaction
as he looked out over the ruined landscape, his usually blue eyes appearing a
dull gray.
“No,
this is wrong,” I argued. My mind could
not make sense of why my father would appear so pleased about
the dead land around us. I started to
accept that this was who my father truly was, not the benevolent man from my dreams.
“Why would you want this?”
With
a condescending arch of an eyebrow, my father stepped towards me. As he did, his face morphed for a
split-second into someone else’s face, his crown suddenly rusted over and
fitted with dull, cracked jewels. As quickly
as the change occurred, it vanished and left me with the recognizable image of
my father, save the disturbing expression and gray eyes.
“You
understand so little,” he accused, his voice different from my earlier dreams. There was a malicious quality in its tone,
though it held the same strong confidence.
He swept out his arm, gesturing outwards from the bluff. “Do you think that prophecy will serve
you? Do you think that you can stop
this? Stop me? You do not have the strength. This is far beyond the comprehension of
mortals.”
“I
don’t understand,” I admitted, my heart pounding in fear.
“This
world will bow to me,” my father continued, ignoring my response. His face and crown flickered again so quickly
that I wasn’t even sure it had actually happened. “You will not stop me. You cannot stop me.
You are weak. Fragile. You are...”
****
“…quite possibly the most dull-witted idiot I
have ever known,” a raspy voice finished as consciousness seeped back into my
body.
Wonderful writing Brian - I cannot wait to read the entire book. You have such a flair for pulling the reader into a scene - even in short excerpts. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Linda! That really means a lot!
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